Seven distinct AI personas, each with specialized expertise and focus areas, ready to provide comprehensive feedback on your manuscript.
From casual readers to professional editors, get the full spectrum of feedback
A straightforward reader who enjoys easy-to-follow stories. Focused on clarity, simplicity, and not getting confused. Perfect for ensuring your work is accessible to all reading levels.
"I really liked this chapter because I could follow what was happening easily. The dialogue felt natural and I didn't get lost in any complicated descriptions..."
Your average reader looking for entertainment and engagement. Cares about story flow, character connection, and whether they'd recommend your book to friends.
"This chapter kept me turning pages! I really connected with the main character's struggle, though I felt the pacing slowed down a bit in the middle section..."
A well-read fan deeply familiar with genre conventions. Evaluates originality within established tropes and how your work compares to genre classics and recent releases.
"Nice subversion of the chosen one trope here! The way you handled the mentor's betrayal felt fresh compared to typical fantasy conventions, though readers might expect more world-building detail..."
An academic or professional critic analyzing literary merit. Focuses on craft, thematic depth, cultural significance, and artistic achievement.
"The recurring motif of broken mirrors effectively reinforces the theme of fractured identity. Your use of unreliable narration here echoes postmodern literary techniques while remaining accessible..."
Focuses on big-picture story elements including plot structure, character development, pacing, and overall narrative flow. Provides strategic guidance for structural improvements.
"Consider strengthening the character arc here. While the plot moves forward effectively, Sarah's motivation for this decision feels underdeveloped. Perhaps adding a scene showing her internal conflict would help..."
Concentrates on sentence-level craft, style, and flow. Analyzes word choice, voice consistency, rhythm, and the effectiveness of individual paragraphs and transitions.
"The sentence 'She walked quietly down the hall' could be more dynamic. Consider 'She crept through the hallway' or 'Her footsteps whispered against the floorboards' for stronger imagery and rhythm..."
Meticulous attention to grammar, punctuation, consistency, and technical accuracy. Identifies errors and inconsistencies in names, dates, facts, and formatting.
"Inconsistency noted: Character is 'Dr. Johnson' in Chapter 1 but 'Doctor Johnson' in Chapter 3. Also, 'towards' should be 'toward' for American English consistency..."
Identifies potentially problematic content and improves representation. Focuses on cultural authenticity, bias detection, inclusive language, and respectful portrayal of marginalized groups.
"The character's cultural background could be explored more authentically. Consider research into actual traditions rather than generalizations. The dialogue here might inadvertently reinforce stereotypes..."
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General Reader + Developmental Editor
Perfect for early drafts when you want to check overall readability and story structure.
Developmental + Line + Copy Editor
Complete professional editorial review covering structure, style, and technical accuracy.
General + Genre + Critical Reader
Understand how different types of readers will experience your work.
Dev + Line + Copy + Sensitivity
Comprehensive professional-level feedback including cultural sensitivity.
General + Dev + Line + Copy + Sensitivity
The complete packageβreader perspective plus full editorial coverage.
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Beyond initial feedback, engage in deep discussions with each persona
"Can you explain more about this character development issue?" or "What specific techniques would improve pacing here?"
"What are some different ways to handle this scene?" or "How would this read to a younger audience?"
"How can I strengthen this dialogue?" or "What cultural considerations should I be aware of?"
"Give me a concrete revision plan for this chapter" or "What should I research before my next draft?"
Experience how seven different perspectives can transform your manuscript feedback process.